About My Pitch Reflection：
In the past few weeks, I released a DA pitch about Artificial Intelligence assisted systems, and received some suggestions and feedback from my classmates. I have summarized the following points:
1. Lack of examples of Artificial Intelligence assisted systems (pictures or short video clips from movies/TV shows)
2. Not mentioning your DA’s timeline and utility (planning is unclear)
3. The DA is too broad (needs to be narrowed down)
4. Think about the target audience
Thank you very much for your help. I will seriously think about how to add content in my next DA to let you know more about Artificial Intelligence assisted systems.
In addition, I watched the pitch of three students and gave my own suggestions and ideas, hoping to help them in their DA.
Comment 1 – Super Intelligence
My first comment is about superintelligence. SI can be thought of as something far superior to human intelligence in all cognitive abilities. Sounds like an interesting new field. My comments suggest that we talk about what SI was created for and what this technology can help humans? The scope of study can be further subdivided.
Comment 2 – Blockchain and Metaverse
My second comment is about region chains and the metasurses, which is a region I don’t know much about, so I have relatively little to offer. First, I learned that the metadverse is a future technology that is currently being developed. Secondly, regional chain. No matter bitcoin or other virtual currencies, the audience is a special group. Therefore, I put forward some doubts and suggestions: the research scope should be clearer, and more relevant literature and articles should be found. How will this project help the future society effectively?
Comment 3 – VR Medicine
My third comment is about the application of virtual reality technology in medical technology. I am very interested in this project. Integrating medicine into VR is a bold and innovative technology. It can help people, and it can reduce human medical errors.
My suggestion is that we need to find more relevant data to prove whether the existing technology can support the combination of medicine and VR. How far in the future can this work be done? What would a preliminary experiment look like? Does this project pose any danger?
Halo Besty 